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Opinion
The keyboard warrior of Twitter
In this guest post, NBN staffer Scott Rhodie writes an unofficial, personal view on his experience with a hostile Twitter critic.Last night I had a strange incident. While on Twitter I noticed someone saying that Australia’s NBN is already outdated. I wrote a small note back explaining they were incorrect.
And their response? The lovely gentleman (whose Twitter profile says: ‘Father of 5 kids, Loving Grandfather of 10 Grandchildren,and 2 Great Granddaughters. love to give heaps to Pollies and Poofters’) said to me: “Go and lick Gillards C*** out U commie Prick”
What's in a name?
In this guest post, Moensie Rossier wonders about the power of names for brands and marketers.
Brands have been having a bit of fun with names lately, not to mention a fair bit of success. Interbrand just named a headhunting firm Cloak & Dagger. And ‘Share a Coke’ showed how much power there is in a name.
The Coke campaign effectively short-circuited the usual mechanics of communication. It undoubtedly stroked people’s egos. But, I believe, its success stems from the fact that it directly and automatically affected people’s behaviour, rather than doing so indirectly by shaping attitudes.
Best ads from Super Bowl 2012
The Super Bowl is all done and a team from North America won. But as well as some sort of sporting event, it’s the world’s biggest advertising showcase. See the best of them right here… and please tell us what you think.
How to debunk media myths
In this post, UWS’s Ullrich Ecker, John Cook and Stephen Lewandowsky argue that cognitive science can help PRs form strategies in managing media misreporting.
A growing cohort of commentators has bemoaned the descent of contemporary political “debate” into a largely fact-free zone.
How about simply focusing on what consumers want?
In this guest post, Peter Mountford argues that brands should think more about what is really going on for consumers
Who here is hoping their favourite brand of toilet paper is going to be organizing a flash mob on their way home from work today?
What the Optus web copyright victory means
In this analysis first published on The Conversation, RMIT’s Marita Shelly examines the implications of Telstra’s defeat over the online rights to the AFL broadcast deal
This week’s Federal Court ruling that Optus customers are able to view sporting matches minutes after they are streamed live without breaching copyright is a landmark decision that alters our understanding of copyright law, and has significant implications for the AFL’s broadcasting rights deal.
Does Gina Rinehart’s bite of a chunk of Fairfax make her an oligarch?
In an article that first appeared in The Conversation, Mark Rolfe wonders whether the mining magnate’s move could turn Fairfax into something resembling America’s Fox network.
Australia’s richest person Gina Rinehart has moved to increase her stake in Fairfax Media, owner of The Age, Sydney Morning Herald and a number of radio stations. Rinehart has already shown her desire to play a role in public life, campaigning against former Prime Minister Kevin Rudd’s aborted mining tax. She has also demonstrated a willingness to make media investments to ensure her pro-business worldview is promulgated.
What does this latest move by Rinehart mean?
Gillard's Australia Day crisis
PM Julia Gillard’s media adviser Tony Hodges has been forced to resign over the Australia Day tent embassy debacle.
It came after it emerged he had revealed opposition leader Tony Abbott’s whereabouts, leading to both politicians being rescued by police in ugly scenes.
Mumbrella editor Tim Burrowes and advertising practitioner Jane Caro debate the topic on Weekend Sunrise’s masters of Spin segment:
The biggest cock-up I made in business
In this guest post, Chris Savage urges agency staff to live the brand.I still shudder when I think about how incredibly stupid I was when I made the biggest stuff up of my career. And then, 18 years later, I did it again. Do not make this mistake with your clients. Ever.
Hey Groupon. Thanks for fucking up email
In this guest post, Daniel Monheit warns that group deal overload is devaluing email marketingEmail marketing used to be fabulous. Back in the heady days of 2010, brands would work hard to build up well qualified databases, upon which they’d bestow carefully crafted correspondence filled with information, offers and incentives. The recipients, of course would be delighted: “Oh look! An email! From one of my favourite brands! And it’s 40 cents off at Woolies this week!”.
The staggering sway of Harold Mitchell
The Power Index today names Aegis Media chairman Harold Mitchell as the most powerful person in Melbourne. Andrew Crook profiles him.
Harold Mitchell takes pride in dispensing with the niceties. When The Power Index visited his South Melbourne private office before Christmas, fresh remains were scattered all over the boardroom table.
Share a Coke with… the moronic masses
The most-read story on Mumbrella last year, with not far off 100,000 page views, was a fairly humdrum yarn about the launch of Coca-Cola’s name-on-a-bottle campaign.The headline, “Coca-Cola puts people’s names on bottles in ‘Share a Coke’ campaign”, though hated by any self-respecting sub-editor, was loved by Google. And in rushed what can be politely described as the public.
Assumptions kill creativity
In this guest post, Gual Barwell disagrees that the sales success of the Old Spice social media campaign was overstated.Yesterday’s post from Cathie McGinn suggested the Old Spice campaign failed to connect with consumers. Based on the facts and figures, I disagree.
What Old Spice and Wieden + Kennedy has done and done phenomenally well is to create a franchise.
The SMH's readers (are wrong) editor
We are now about five months into the reign of Australia’s first readers’ editor. And I don’t think it is working.
It struck me at the time of Judy Prisk’s appointment to the Sydney Morning Herald that the fact that her boss was editor-in-chief Peter Fray was not going to be ideal if she was going to be the independent voice of the reader.
The emperor's new fragrance: Old Spice’s campaign failure
In this guest post, Cathie McGinn slays a sacred cow of 21st century marketing – the highly awarded Old Spice campaign.One of the biggest myths of recent times (by which I mean a story of great heroism and triumph we’d all like to believe but deep down know to be untrue) is the Old Spice social media campaign. It’s been much lauded and awarded as an example of outstanding content, a creative and collaborative way of connecting with consumers and driving a record increase in sales.
World Vision seeks the smell of Old Spice’s viral success
World Vision Australia is among the first to attempt to tap into the viral success of Old Spice’s social media drive with its own take on the mcuh talked about campaign.
It features CEO Tim Costello making a pitch on behalf of the charity.
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Comments
16 Jul 10
2:15 pm
good work World Vision – great to see a big organisation jumping in on the latest viral magic (and to see a CEO in his robe!)
16 Jul 10
2:18 pm
Can’t wait to see the dialogue on this. .
Understanding the imperative to create cut through for donations, how does being classified a ‘charity’ provide carte blanche for capitalising on someone else’s blood sweat and tears?
If this was any other brand outside of the charity sector, they would be crucified. The lines of professional courtesy and respect for another’s IP have been crossed.
The equity it’s taken World Vision to build over the last couple of decades has certainly been affected in my mind
16 Jul 10
2:19 pm
“Emperor Penguin” so excellent. Nice one World Vision, unashamedly capitalising straight away on a great idea. And I love that it’s the CEO!
16 Jul 10
2:21 pm
@gothamgal yes I did straight away think of the potential legal ramifications here. *shrugs* I think this one needs to be taken for exactly what it is though. This might capture the minds of an audience that World Vision has yet to harness? It might completely get sept over, who knows!
16 Jul 10
2:22 pm
*swept
16 Jul 10
2:31 pm
I think it’s tops! Good on them for striking whilst the iron’s hot. Great job.
16 Jul 10
2:42 pm
More wow. Effective. Clever. 1. It got covered in mumbrella 2. I watched it. 3. got the message. No doubt a whole new audience for World Vision.
16 Jul 10
2:48 pm
It’s awesome to see Tim Costello do something like this!
16 Jul 10
2:57 pm
I cant see Old Spice complaining at all. If anything people will see this ad and be reminding of the Old Spice ad – it is almost an endorsement for Old Spice.
Good on ya Tim! It is good to see a CEO rolling up the sleeves and living and breathing his companies message.
I think they will be fine legally. now, if brut did this they could be in bother
16 Jul 10
3:04 pm
Very cool
16 Jul 10
3:07 pm
nice try but it’s too long, tries too hard and is ultimately a little boring. everything that the original is not.
16 Jul 10
3:22 pm
Thought I’d reply to @gothamgal
Firstly this video is very clearly a parody, and we ran it past our legal dept before creating the clip. Secondly I have personally been in touch with the Creative Director responsible for the originals to give them a courteous heads up and ensure they were okay with our homage to their genius.
It was an amazing effort for a organisation like ours to turn something like this around in less than 24 hours. With all the approvals and work required from a team across the business on what was a crazy idea about 11am yesterday.
We are trying to take World Vision forward using digital media as an important channel. Its still early days and we won’t be stopping the tv ads just yet but its great to get the organisation excited about social media.
Thanks for the comments too.
Keith Don
Digital Channels Manager
World Vision Australia
@keithdon
16 Jul 10
3:34 pm
Without approvals you could’ve done a 100 in 24 hours like them, but I guess that’s the problem right.
16 Jul 10
3:40 pm
gothamgal. “The lines of professional courtesy and respect for another’s IP have been crossed”
Ohh come on now.
Welcome to the World 3.0.
It’s a sharing economy.
As a charity or otherwise. Great idea.
16 Jul 10
3:44 pm
Just saw your comment Keith.
Well said!
And congratulations to your team in turning this around.
The thought behind the latest (amazing) viral push for OldSpice to is tap into this whole world of social media. The fact that WorldVision has leveraged that… is precisely what OldSpice want! And in execution it works for them both.
Bravo
16 Jul 10
3:44 pm
Awful.
It’s like watching your dad trying to be cool.
Who’s this aimed at, really?
Unfortunately, in this case, the cause doesn’t justify the means.
16 Jul 10
3:44 pm
Wish the CEO was looking straight forward though!
16 Jul 10
3:45 pm
Keith old boy – massive and very excellent job.
16 Jul 10
3:57 pm
Yes, well its not really in the leagues of http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2ArIj236UHs
That’s what you’re aiming for.
16 Jul 10
4:02 pm
There’s a word for what you’re all doing in here. And it’s:
http://searchcrm.techtarget.co.....troturfing
This is a really, really bad ad.
The attempt at humour is inappropriate for the gravity of the subject. Young people will reject it, and old people won’t get it. There is nothing good to say about this.
World Vision employees. Please stop posting.
16 Jul 10
4:52 pm
couldn’t they get him a teleprompter!? he’s clearly reading off screen, which is understandable, he can’t be expected to learn all those lines by heart. but the fact that he’s not looking straight at the camera totally ruins it.
16 Jul 10
5:09 pm
Yeah nah
16 Jul 10
5:17 pm
Lighten up B…. good try lecturing Rev Costello on the ‘gravity’ of poverty.
16 Jul 10
5:29 pm
Dear 5:17.
An ad is an ad, and this is a bad one.
Me lightening up won’t change that. I’m just being honest.
The issue at hand is a desperate one, and deserves much, much, better than this. Sadly, the best of intentions (no matter how worthy) won’t make people give you money, and this ad is a perfect example. And the sooner then cheer squad at World Vision understands this, the better it’ll be for the people who need your help.
The ad is awful. It’ll raise no money.
Please World Vision staff – move on.
16 Jul 10
5:55 pm
I couldn’t watch it past the 5 second mark. Awful.
16 Jul 10
7:31 pm
It’s not great. But good on them. They struck quickly. I watched it – right to the end (grimacing a bit, sure), but a message got through.
Their tv ads and DM pieces have all begun to look the same same to me and this made me look.
I used to sponsor a kid. Now I know there’s other ways of donating. I’ll check it out.
I’m on a Mac.
16 Jul 10
8:27 pm
awful guys. very, very awful.
wish id never seen tim costello’s bare gut, very, very much.
17 Jul 10
12:27 am
Boring as bat shit. Its copy and paste job with bedroom production values and takes 4 times longer to get the message across. Like T said, its like watching your Dad trying to rap. Homage is nice when it is done good. It is easy to duplicate but it is difficult to be better.
17 Jul 10
7:54 am
You guys are mean. I’d like to see you lot execute a better social media idea on a charity budget in 24 hours. Sure it’s not “cool” but good on Tim C for being a good sport. Leave him alone.
17 Jul 10
1:46 pm
I agree with ralphy, it obviously wasn’t an expensive ad and it shows, in fact there’s probably a billion youtube parodies that are better crafted and as funny as the original. but then it’s still a good cause. now if they actually paid for broadcast publication that would be a different story.
17 Jul 10
5:41 pm
I am disgusted by the negativity of some of these comments. If any of you have paid attention, this video has become a viral success and in the end – that is the point of social media! Since when was ‘what works’ about quality?! Its about distribution, timing and mommentum. Have you ever visited YouTube?!
Additionally, when have you seen a CEO cared enough about his organization to make himself vunerable like this? It disgusts me that you guys are having a stab at him when I am sure you wouldnt be willing to do the same.
Shame on you Mumbrella readers, I have never been so embaressed to be amongst your readership.
Thank you Keith for all your hard work, its obviously that your organization is trying to remain relevant. Not many brands could pull this off. I will be retweeting.
18 Jul 10
6:39 am
this is gold …. @OhDoctah vs. @OldSpice http://youtu.be/o-IHk6FKyeg
18 Jul 10
7:23 pm
Very cool – just wondering why Tim isn’t looking at camera? Would have been heaps better if his eyeline was to camera.
19 Jul 10
4:51 am
Idea/strategy was good, execution was really poor.
19 Jul 10
11:38 am
So apparently because this is a charity we’re supposed to excuse it for being a cheap, poorly executed excuse for a ‘social media strategy’? I’m not that patronising.
If the WV employees and others here want to run around thinking that this is ‘good’ then all you’re doing is disrespecting the original and lowering the standard for all production values.
Here we are (mostly) marketing professionals and we tell it like it is. And this is bad. If you don’t know the difference then I’m glad you’re not doing this professionally.
19 Jul 10
1:20 pm
Good on you, Tim.
19 Jul 10
1:44 pm
Anyone know which agency they use?
19 Jul 10
2:27 pm
Brilliant, loved it, good on you World Vision.
19 Jul 10
4:02 pm
@amnesia are on their books. I can similarities between this and the realestate.com non-viral viral at the beginning of the year in terms of production quality…anyone know?
19 Jul 10
4:09 pm
Wrong subject matter for a pisstake on a funny ad.
And Tim, try talking straight to the camera like the original does as that’s the essence of the concept.
FAIL!
19 Jul 10
4:15 pm
this is to be commended for just being “on to it”.
i also think our industry needs to take a chill pill!
19 Jul 10
4:23 pm
Painful to watch. Way to instill guilt into a pleasurable meme! Good result for a quick turnaround but I still want to stick forks in my eyes.
19 Jul 10
4:27 pm
Oh such a good try… but unfortunately it jarrs because the delivery is so bad. I love that they tried just wish it was executed properly… Old Spice will love that a not-for-profit is imitating them… greatest form of flattery and all that. Agree should be commended for being onto it… but i saw Old Spice on youtube via facebook a few months ago… anyway if nothing else it was great for WV to do something humorous rather than those images of malnourished children we are now all so cold to.
19 Jul 10
6:34 pm
Yep, it sure won’t win metal.
And judging by a lot of the negative comments regarding this ‘spin-off” campaign that seems to be what counts for a lot of people. The production quality was (deliberately?) poor, and BADLY in need of a tele-prompter – again no metal.
So, should WV have had a quarter of a mill productiuon budget to appease the Mumbrella readers? Just maybe they put that production money out into parts of the world that are a lot less fortunate than us.
C’mon … lighten up. They are trying to do good for kids around the world who deserve food, shelter and clean water and not trying to win metal.
20 Jul 10
12:26 am
Dear People
I think a lot of you are confusing this with ‘stuff’, when it’s very clearly a ‘thing’, if you know what I mean.
You people are in advertising. ADVERTISING. I would be too, if I could spell. Or direct art or whatever you people do… anyway …
It looks like it was made for $10, which is fab. If they spent money on it would look like something else, like they were serious, which they’re not. The only thing serious is trying every (cheap) trick in the book to get people talking and they did. The lameness is part of the ‘thing’. As I said, it’s a ‘thing’ and you know what I mean.
It’s also good. GOOD as in ‘good’. Not as in ‘genius’ but as in good, like cheese is good, like penguins are good.
It’s disposable. It’s meant to be disposable. Disposable is good. A disposable ‘thing’ is even better. Like penguins are better (I was wrong when I said they were good, they are better than good).
Not looking at the camera, those wacky transitions, the lameness. It’s part of the thing. It is what it is. It’s meant to be what it is. It’s not dressed up as something else. Can’t you see it? Damnit, even I can see it.
Disposable. Make noise, stir up dust, maybe get a controversy happening, do it all for $10 and then move on. That’s guerilla marketing (or is it ‘gorilla’ marketing, I’m not sure, but whatever it is, it is covered in hair and makes my heart race).
The penguin thing was sheer genius.
And the thing worked on me. It was extremely effective. I’m donating $13.75 to Greenpeace. I want to save those penguins from the Japanese. Damn them to hell for what they are doing to the penguins.
I love this, I love Tim, I want to see Tim in a towel. I want to see more Tim, much, much more Tim. When I think ‘man’ I think Tim. But I’m not his type; I know that, I live with that. It’s hard, try being me and you’ll know. For $75 for a half hour you will also understand.
Sure, I could make Tim happy. That’s what I do, but I know it wouldn’t work out. I’m a realist folks. And those of you who think this is anything less than ‘Good’ are not realists.
You have to get over it. It’s disposable. It has worked. People are watching it. There are some of you who know this, I love you. Remember $75 gets you 30 minutes and that’s real value.
So let’s join Tim and save the penguins and children and those other important things that people do from Zodiac inflatables in the bitter cold of the Southern Ocean.
Love
X
Lavinia
It’s lonely out ther in the Souther Oceans; I can send photos.
20 Jul 10
1:11 am
WTF?
20 Jul 10
1:29 am
Dear ‘Edster’
WTF?
What does that mean?
I know what it means.
It means you don’t get it. You don’t get the WV thing, you take it seriously. You think there is some ‘standard’ for production values.
You think that a successful campaign is not open for zero budget parody. Or you think the parody has to be executed to some ‘standard’.
You think there are ‘rules’ for things.
The consumer doesn’t care. They either like it or not. What ‘ad’ people think is not relevant to them.
It also means you don’t get my previous comment. It means you can’t, won’t, or don’t read between the lines. All the fun stuff is between the lines.
Spelling it out for you only ruins the fun. And I could spell it out for you. But I’d have to spell slowly. And I’m not that patient.
Edster, someone with a stick has rolled your rock over.
There are no rules. There is no right and no wrong.
There are other rocks nearby, you can run for cover.
X
Lavinia.
20 Jul 10
3:50 am
I really hate to say this, but it’s the Daryl Somers of viral videos.
Or as someone once used to describe something else, the category of “Hey internet, look at me, I’ve set myself on fire!”
@Keith Don – What were you guys thinking? Was this meant to “cut through the noise”? Was this meant to be “so funny you’d give a tip” – ala-internet busking? If you were going to have a performance, get a *performer* or one of those viral video youtube wunderkind. Don’t make your CEO just another 10-second laughing stock on FAIL blog.
Now if you got *Peter* Costello in a towel… and looking at the camera… with *that* smirk…
I clearly don’t get it. Call me old fashioned, but I prefer my bleeding heart appeals to stay sincere and not try to pull off any of this ironic, random crap.
WV = pictures of 3rd world despair, refugee camps, smiling sponsored children, making me guilty in my cushy chair.
WV != ‘irony’, meme surfing, penguins (belongs to Linux/Greenpeace/WWF!), funny.
Won’t somebody please think of the children?
20 Jul 10
8:12 am
i just lost 1min 37seconds of my life. terrible. look at the camera you goose
20 Jul 10
8:47 am
Your point is well made Dino.
Clearly that 1 min 37 seconds of your life is FAR more important than the lives of the 20 children around the world who died of starvation during that same amount of time.
On behalf of those 20 children I apologise.
20 Jul 10
9:40 am
what were they thinking? wrong, wrong, wrong.
20 Jul 10
9:47 am
Lavina – I think you’re the one that doesn’t get it… You donated to Greenpeace for christs sake. I would hardly call that an ‘extremely effective’ ad for World Vision when you feel compelled to donate to a completely different not-for-profit!
I also don’t believe that World Vision purposely made it look cheap. I think they were trying to create a great video and just didn’t have the ability internally to produce something up to scratch. It’s a shame because I think the concept was good but the execution has let it down.
20 Jul 10
9:56 am
Me thinks too many World Vision marketing employees are driving the ‘positive’ discussion here.
20 Jul 10
10:45 am
Lavinia, you are my hero x
20 Jul 10
12:23 pm
Lavina – I can’t stop laughing! 75 bucks for 30mins? You can’t buy a junior art director for that kind of money!
20 Jul 10
12:28 pm
@Longtime : If you click on the link for Lavinia’s username, I think you’ll get an idea what you can get for that $75. =) Love you long time!
20 Jul 10
12:48 pm
@krangsquared Hahahaha! That’s nice – I like that!
Give that man a job at World Vision!
20 Jul 10
12:48 pm
*or woman even…
20 Jul 10
3:18 pm
I reckon getting an audience of 17 500 people (well, that number of views, anyway) makes this a success. Kudos to Tim and the team.
20 Jul 10
7:21 pm
It’s great. What’s with all the negativity?
20 Jul 10
9:31 pm
Keith and Tim, awesome work!
20 Jul 10
10:40 pm
Lavinia:
Dear Sir and/or Madam
Just to clear up your questions and let you sleep better, the WTF was directed to the ad, to you, your post and your web link.
I dare not slip back under another rock for fear of running into you but thanks for the reminder that I’m actually online. Sometimes I forget what a screwed up place this really is.
luv ya
23 Jul 10
1:48 pm
As a child sponsor I am pleased to see that a lot of money wasn’t wasted on production, getting an actor etc etc… I would be worried if my contribution to looking after a child was actually being spent on big production TV commercials (and yes, before anyone starts I know they have ‘real’ TV commercials out there..). Good on them for trying to reach the social marketing audience, for jumping on the back of a campaign that is well recognised (and I knew before reading the directors comment that they would have run it past the powers that be, they aren’t dumb) and good on Tim for getting behind the company and rolling his sleeves up (or taking them off completely!), and whilst not all of us are excited about seeing him in just his bathroom, who cares!! People are talking about it, so instead of complaining about it why not put your hand in your pocket and help look after a child that needs it…. it’s less than a coffee a day…. And no I don’t work for any child sponsor program…
23 Jul 10
1:56 pm
P.S @krangsquared – thanks for the advice, clicked on it to see who this funny Lavinia was… great, now the IT department are going to think I am looking at porn which will be brought to the attention of my boss and now I may get fired cos I have done something wrong according to the IT protocol…. oh well, didn’t like it here much anymore anyway…
26 Jul 10
10:09 am
Nice attempt to follow on. Who directed Tim not to look straight to camera? What a shame. It’s completely distracting and foregoes the compelling presence of the Old Spice guy “talking directly to me”, making the medium personal.
If they have a second camera cut, I would strongly recommend they re-edit this and get it right. At the moment, its slightly off target. Other than that, shoot it again.
But good on Tim for being brave enough to do it!